Back at it again! Slight change with style on this one... I find that by making the lineart layer purple and setting it to linear burn makes everything look nicer. Changes in lighting too... It's a little jarring to change style but better now than 10 pages in right?
Thank you! I did fix the hand, but “buisness” is sadly my mistake... oh well. Let’s just say it’s an in-universe alternate spelling. Like how some British people write “colour”
Also, I may need to try that technique you describe. I myself am looking to keep on making it better, and that might help.
(Also, the Mercenary's hand is backwards)
Did you fix the hand? I don't see anything wrong with any hand. But there is "Buisness" in panel 2, unless that's slang ;)
Cute last panel!
Really, I laughed :D